自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence using past tense, avoid filler words, correct verb forms and pronouns, and keep it within 3–4 concise sentences. Add one specific detail (age or where you learned) and use a linking word to connect the ideas.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I still have it today. In fact, I learned to ride it by myself when I was about seven, so it has a lot of sentimental value. Because I practiced every afternoon in my neighborhood, I became quite confident riding on the road.

建議: Be a bit more specific and add a brief supporting reason or example. Use linking words to make the answer coherent and avoid repeating phrases. Mention any places or groups where bikes are still common to show nuance.

範例: No, I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorbikes for daily commuting. However, bikes are still common in parks and among university students for short trips, so their use depends on the area and purpose.

× Yes I do, I had a bike when I were a try and I still keep it today.

✓ Yes I did. I had a bike when I was a child and I still have it today.

Multiple problems: 'Yes I do' mismatches the past question; use 'Yes I did' for past. 'were' is incorrect past of 'be' for singular first person; use 'was'. 'a try' is incorrect word choice for 'child'. 'keep' is awkward; use 'have' to indicate possession. Suggestion: match tense to the question, use proper past forms ('did', 'was'), choose correct nouns ('child'), and use 'have' for possession.

× Actually one fun fact is it I use uh, I learned how to ride a bike by myself.

✓ Actually, one fun fact is that I learned how to ride a bike by myself.

The sentence has unnecessary filler and wrong verb pattern. Remove 'use' and filler 'uh' and add 'that' to introduce the clause. 'learned' is the correct past tense; no -ing form is needed here. Suggestion: simplify the clause to 'one fun fact is that I learned...'. Use commas to improve clarity.

× I don't think bikes are popular in my country because most people in my country use motorbikes to travel around the city.

✓ I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people use motorbikes to travel around the city.

Sentence is mostly correct but 'bikes' can be ambiguous; 'bicycles' is clearer. Repeating 'in my country' is redundant. 'Don't think' correctly expresses present opinion. Suggestion: avoid repetition and choose clearer nouns for formality.