自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cần trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và ngắn gọn hơn; sửa ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: 'bought me a bicycle', 'sold it', 'ride it again'). Thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể liên quan cảm xúc hoặc kỷ niệm, dùng liên từ để nối ý và tránh lặp từ 'but'.

範例: Yes. My mother bought me a bicycle when I was ten, and I rode it every day. I loved cycling because it gave me freedom and helped me explore the neighborhood. Unfortunately my father later sold it, but I hope to buy or borrow a similar bike and start riding again soon.

建議: Cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp (ví dụ: 'ride', 'motorbike'), tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do với ví dụ cụ thể (an older generation, commuting patterns). Dùng liên từ (however, nowadays) để mạch lạc.

範例: No, bicycles are not very popular in my country. However, older people still use them for short trips. Nowadays most teenagers commute to school on motorbikes, and adults often drive cars to work because they are faster and more convenient.

× Of course, when I was a child, especially when I was 10 years old, my mother bought for me a bicycle and I rode it every day.

✓ Of course, when I was a child, especially when I was 10 years old, my mother bought me a bicycle and I rode it every day.

The main issue is word order with the verb 'buy'. In English, the indirect object can follow the verb without 'for' (bought me a bicycle) or use 'bought a bicycle for me'. Using 'bought for me a bicycle' is unnatural. Use past simple consistently for past events. Suggestion: say 'my mother bought me a bicycle' or 'my mother bought a bicycle for me.'

× But until now my father sold it.

✓ But my father sold it later.

The phrase 'until now' suggests a connection to the present and should be used with present perfect (e.g., 'has sold'), but the student intended a past sequence. 'My father sold it later' or 'My father has sold it' (if still relevant now) is correct. Also word order and temporal signal should match verb tense. Suggestion: If the sale happened in the past and is a completed action, use 'My father sold it.' If emphasizing relevance now, use 'My father has sold it.'

× But in the future I will drive this bicycle again.

✓ But in the future I will ride this bicycle again.

The verb 'drive' is used for vehicles that are driven (cars), while bicycles are 'ridden'. Use 'ride' with bicycles. The future tense 'will' is acceptable here. Suggestion: say 'I will ride this bicycle again.'

× No bicycle.

✓ No, bicycles are not popular in my country.

'No bicycle.' is a fragment and not a full answer. It lacks a verb and does not fit conversational context. Expand into a full sentence that answers the question. Suggestion: Begin with 'No,' and provide a complete clause: 'No, bicycles are not popular in my country.'

× Bicycles are not popular in my country, but in my opinion some elders still write it.

✓ Bicycles are not popular in my country, but in my opinion some elderly people still ride them.

Several issues: 'elders' is unnatural in this context—use 'elderly people' or 'older people'. 'Write' is wrong verb; should be 'ride'. 'It' mismatches plural 'bicycles'—use 'them'. Suggestion: Use 'some elderly people still ride them.'

× But nowadays teenagers usually write by motorbike to school or parents or adults will use cars to ride to work instead of bikes.

✓ Nowadays teenagers usually go to school by motorbike, and adults or parents use cars to drive to work instead of bikes.

Multiple errors: 'write by motorbike' should be 'go to school by motorbike' or 'ride motorbikes to school'. Preposition 'by' is fine with 'motorbike' but the verb must be 'go' or 'ride'. 'Parents or adults will use cars to ride to work' is awkward; people 'drive cars to work'. Tense mixing: use simple present for habitual actions: 'usually go/ride' and 'use'. Suggestion: Split into two clauses and use appropriate verbs: 'Nowadays teenagers usually ride motorbikes to school, and adults or parents use cars to drive to work instead of bicycles.'