自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and clarity: answer the question directly using past tense, keep it concise (max 5 sentences), and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common errors: use past tense (“didn’t have”), avoid repetition, and clarify which bicycle you mean (own or shared).

範例: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. Instead, I used a neighbor’s bicycle quite often to play with my friends after school. Because it was nearby and easy to borrow, I learned basic riding skills and enjoyed short rides around the neighborhood.

建議: Make the answer more natural and specific: state your opinion clearly, then give one or two concrete reasons with linking words (e.g., because, for example, so). Avoid filler sounds and incorrect modal usage (don’t overuse “should”). Use precise vocabulary like “commute,” “students,” or “short distances.”

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances. For example, students often ride to school and office workers cycle to nearby workplaces since it is cheaper and faster in crowded areas.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was child, but yeah, I have a bicycle which I use a lot for my for me playing with my friends.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I did have a bicycle that I used a lot to play with my friends.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time phrase 'when I was a child'; tense must be past. Also missing article 'a' before 'child' and contains redundancy 'for my for me playing' which should be 'to play'. Use past simple 'didn't have' and 'used' to match the past context.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was child, but yeah, I have a bicycle which I use a lot for my for me playing with my friends.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I did have a bicycle that I used a lot to play with my friends.

The original has awkward and redundant structure ('for my for me playing with my friends') and unclear relative clause 'which I use a lot'. Rewriting to 'I did have a bicycle that I used a lot to play with my friends' makes the meaning clear and grammatically correct.

× In my country bikes are popular because uh, uh, population should, uh, should use bikes in their daily use for going their offices or by schools or anything else.

✓ In my country bikes are popular because people should use them for daily travel to work, school, or other places.

'Population should' is unnatural; use 'people should'. 'Should' is a modal but repetition is unnecessary. 'In their daily use for going their offices or by schools' is incorrect preposition and phrasing; use 'for daily travel to work, school, or other places'. Also replace 'them' to refer to bikes correctly.

× In my country bikes are popular because uh, uh, population should, uh, should use bikes in their daily use for going their offices or by schools or anything else.

✓ In my country bikes are popular because people should use them for daily travel to work, school, or other places.

The word 'population' is not the natural pronoun for people; 'people' is better. The pronoun 'their' was used ambiguously; 'them' should refer to bikes, while 'people' is the subject. Clarifying pronouns prevents confusion.

× In my country bikes are popular because uh, uh, population should, uh, should use bikes in their daily use for going their offices or by schools or anything else.

✓ In my country bikes are popular because people should use them for daily travel to work, school, or other places.

Phrases like 'in their daily use for going their offices' and 'by schools' misuse prepositions. Use 'for daily travel to work, school, or other places' which uses correct prepositions 'to' and omits unnecessary 'by'.