自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, clarity and relevance. Begin with a clear topic sentence that answers directly, use past tense for past situations, and avoid incorrect words (e.g., "advice" is wrong). Add one or two supporting details with linking words. Keep it under 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I rode it almost every day after school. Because I practiced a lot, I became confident riding on the road and even joined neighborhood races occasionally.

建議: Give a direct opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use full sentences, avoid repetition, and add linking words to organize your ideas. Aim for 2–4 sentences with relevant vocabulary (e.g., "commute," "environmentally friendly," "cycling culture").

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially in cities where traffic is heavy. For example, many people use bicycles to commute short distances because they are cheap and environmentally friendly, and there are also more bike lanes now to encourage cycling.

× Yes, of course I have advice when I was a child.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'have' with a past time marker 'when I was a child', causing a tense mismatch. Change to past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Also 'advice' is the wrong word; the correct noun is 'bike'. Suggestion: use past tense for past situations and choose the correct noun (bike).

× Yeah, yes.

✓ Yes, they are quite popular in my country.

The original reply is incomplete and does not answer the examiner's question. Provide a full sentence that matches the present simple question about general facts: use 'they are' (present simple) and a modifier 'quite popular' or similar. Suggestion: answer directly and give brief elaboration if possible (e.g., 'Yes, they are popular, especially in cities.').