自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly (mention whether you had a bike), use a topic sentence and one or two supporting details, keep it natural and concise, avoid repeating the examiner's question, and correct grammar (past tense).

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I used to ride it to school and around my neighborhood. It helped me become more independent and I fondly remember learning to ride with my older brother.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence (state whether bikes are popular), then give two specific reasons with linking words. Pay attention to grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles, plural/singular), use more precise vocabulary (commuter bikes, scooters, heavy traffic), and keep answers to no more than 4–5 sentences. Avoid vague phrases and repetitive wording.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, many people prefer bicycles or scooters for daily commuting because traffic congestion in large cities makes cars impractical. Secondly, in rural and hilly areas people enjoy cycling for recreation and exercise. Therefore, both convenience and leisure explain why two-wheelers are widespread.

× Even people love to ride bike when they goes in the mountain.

✓ Even people love to ride bikes when they go to the mountains.

This sentence has multiple issues covered by the allowed list: 'bike' should be plural to match general reference to riding bikes, which is a singular/plural issue (ID 1), but the primary errors are subject-verb agreement 'they goes' (third person singular issue ID 2 and subject-verb agreement ID 27) and incorrect use of prepositions/phrases 'in the mountain' (ID 11). Correct form: 'ride bikes' (plural noun), 'they go' (correct verb form for plural subject), and 'to the mountains' or 'in the mountains' depending on intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'ride bikes' and 'go to the mountains' for natural English.

× People generally avoid using cars because there is lot of traffic in the city area, especially in the metro cities where the common people uses more frequently bikes and scooties.

✓ People generally avoid using cars because there is a lot of traffic in the city, especially in metro cities where ordinary people use bikes and scooters more frequently.

Multiple grammar problems here match the allowed list: 'there is lot of traffic' lacks the article 'a' (article errors ID 22) and is a 'there be' construction issue (ID 3); 'the city area' is unnecessarily wordy and 'metro cities' doesn't need 'the' (incorrect use of the definite article ID 17); 'the common people uses' has subject-verb agreement error (uses -> use) which is a third person plural issue (ID 2 and ID 27); 'bikes and scooties' includes a nonstandard plural 'scooties' (use 'scooters') which is a singular/plural and vocabulary correctness issue (ID 1). The correction adds the missing article 'a', removes unnecessary 'the', fixes verb agreement to 'use', and replaces 'scooties' with the standard 'scooters'. Suggestions: include articles where required ('a lot of'), ensure verb agrees with plural subject ('people use'), and use standard nouns ('scooters').