自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答太简短，缺乏信息和细节，无法展示语言能力。建议给出一个主题句表明有或没有自行车，然后用1-2句补充具体细节（比如什么时候有、谁买的、你如何使用、对你的影响），并使用连接词使叙述连贯。例如用because、so、when等。注意不要超过5句。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used it to ride to school and visit friends every day. Because I practiced a lot, I became quite confident riding on busy streets.

建議: 回答较好但仍可更具体且更自然。建议先直接回答（Yes/No），然后用1-2句具体说明原因或举例，使用连接词如 because、for example、so 来使表达更连贯，尽量使用更地道的短语（e.g. widely used, common mode of transport）。保持不超过5句。

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short trips and commuting because they are cheap and convenient. In big cities, bike lanes and shared bike programs make cycling a common mode of transport.

× Just.

✓ Yes, I did.

学生回答“Just.”在此语境下不完整，缺少动词和主语，属于句子结构错误（无谓语或不完整回答）。应使用完整句子例如“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn't.”以清楚回答“Did you have a bike when you were a child?” 提示：使用助动词did加主语I和动词have的原形（did + 主语 + 动词原形）。

× Yeah, in the street we can see many bikes.

✓ Yes, on the streets we can see many bikes.

原句中介词和冠词搭配不自然，应把“in the street”改为更常用的复数短语“on the streets”表示通常在街上看到许多自行车。另外开头用“Yes”比“Yeah”更正式；句子整体时态和结构是陈述现在的一般事实，保持原时态即可。建议：使用介词on搭配street的复数形式，表示普遍现象。