自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer does not address the question and is unclear. To improve, directly state whether you had a bike (topic sentence), then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., how often you used it, who taught you, a memorable event). Keep responses natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood because my parents encouraged outdoor play. My older brother taught me to balance on it, and I remember racing him to the park on summer afternoons.

建議: Your answer is too short and unsupported. Expand with a clear topic sentence stating your view, then give specific reasons or examples (e.g., popularity in cities, for commuting, or among children) and use linking words like "because" or "however" to make your response coherent. Aim for 2–4 sentences with relevant vocabulary.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. In big cities you often see dedicated bike lanes and shared bike programs, so cycling has become a convenient and affordable option for daily travel.

× I have I have any advice?

✓ Did I have any?

The student attempted to answer a past-tense question but produced an ungrammatical sentence with repetition and wrong verb form. The examiner asked, 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' which requires a past-tense response. Use the auxiliary 'did' plus the base verb to form a past simple question or short answer. If the student intended to ask for advice, that is off-topic; likely they meant to say whether they had a bike. Correct short answers: 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.' If asking for advice, rephrase to 'Do you have any advice?' or 'Could I have any advice?'. For this question, respond with 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.' to match past tense and subject-verb structure.