自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer simply repeated the examiner's question and gave no information. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Keep it natural, avoid repetition, and use linking words if adding details. For example, state whether you had a bike, mention who gave it to you or how often you used it, and include a short reason or memory to enrich the answer.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used it every afternoon to ride with my friends around the neighborhood. I loved it because it made me feel independent and helped me explore nearby parks.

建議: Your answer expresses an opinion but is grammatically weak, repetitive and lacks clear structure and details. Improve by giving a direct topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons or examples, using linking words (for example, because, also, however). Correct verb forms and avoid filler sounds like “uh.”

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in my town there are dedicated cycle lanes and many children and adults ride to school or the market, which makes cycling both convenient and common.

× I think, uh, bikes are popular in my country because when we were a child, uh, me and my friends, they're ride, ride a bike.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because when we were children, my friends and I rode bikes.

Multiple errors: 'when we were a child' uses singular 'child' with plural subject—this is a singular and plural issue related to past reference; corresponds to Past tense issue (ID 5) because the action should be in past tense. Use 'children' for plural and 'my friends and I' for correct pronoun order and subject form (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). 'They're ride, ride a bike' is ungrammatical: 'rode bikes' is the correct past tense form of 'ride' for plural subject. Suggestion: use plural noun 'children', place pronouns in subject order 'my friends and I', and use past simple 'rode' for completed past actions; remove filler commas and repeated words.