自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap daha net ve akıcı olmalı; gereksiz dolgu kelimelerinden (umm, uh) kaçının. Konuya direkt cevap verip kısa bir neden ve bir örnek ekleyin. Ayrıca kelime seçimine dikkat edin: 'unable to' yerine 'couldn't ride it' doğru ama çelişki oluşturan ifadelerden kaçının ('started not writing it' yanlış). Önerilen yapı: 1) Kısa doğrudan cevap 2) Sebep 3) Kısa örnek veya sonuç. Örnek bağlaçlar: 'because', 'so', 'for example'.

範例: Yes, I had a bike, but I couldn't ride it at first because I was afraid of falling. For example, I fell once and after that I avoided riding until I was older.

建議: Cevap daha spesifik ve dilbilgisi açısından doğru olmalı. Genel ifadeler yerine kendi ülkeniz hakkında konuşun; kelime sırası ve çoğul/tekil uyumuna dikkat edin ("every bike is popular" yerine "bicycles are popular"). Bağlaçları kullanarak neden ve bir örnek verin. Önerilen yapı: 1) Kısa doğrudan cevap 2) Sebep 3) Kısa örnek/kanıt. Kullanılabilecek ifadeler: 'because', 'for instance', 'especially among'.

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and children enjoy riding them. For instance, parks and school areas are often filled with kids riding bikes after classes.

× Umm, so I had a bike but I couldn't ride it because, uh, I was unable to.

✓ Umm, so I had a bike but I couldn't ride it because I was unable to ride it.

The original sentence ends with 'I was unable to' which is incomplete and requires a verb to indicate what the speaker was unable to do. Add the base verb 'ride it' to complete the meaning. Use past tense 'was unable' to match the time frame of 'had a bike'. Suggestion: always complete 'unable to' with an action verb.

× One time I fell and then I started not writing it.

✓ One time I fell and then I stopped riding it.

The phrase 'started not writing it' uses the wrong verb ('writing' instead of 'riding') and incorrect negative structure. To express that the speaker ceased riding after falling, use 'stopped riding it' (past tense). 'Stopped' + gerund is the correct pattern for indicating an action was discontinued.

× Yes, I believe every bike is popular in every country because when kids go want to go out and ride their bikes play with their friends.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are popular in many countries because kids want to go out and ride their bikes and play with their friends.

The original sentence has repetition and missing conjunctions and incorrect phrasing ('go want to go out'). Fix by removing 'every' (too absolute), using plural 'bikes', and correct verb sequence: 'kids want to go out and ride their bikes and play with their friends.' Ensure parallel structure when listing activities.

× So I do think that ride are popular in every country.

✓ So I do think that riding bikes is popular in every country.

The phrase 'ride are popular' is ungrammatical: 'ride' as a noun is incorrect here and 'are' doesn't agree with intended noun phrase. Use the gerund 'riding bikes' as the subject and singular verb 'is' for the activity as a general idea. Alternatively, 'bikes are popular' would also be correct.