自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Répondez directement et naturellement à la question initiale plutôt que de répéter-la. Donnez une phrase d'ouverture claire (oui/non) suivie d'un ou deux détails spécifiques (âge, qui vous l'a offert, où vous l'utilisiez) en utilisant des mots de liaison simples si nécessaire.

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was six — it was a red balance bike my father bought me, and I used to ride it every afternoon around our neighborhood until I was old enough for pedals.

建議: Commencez par une phrase claire exprimant votre opinion, puis expliquez avec des détails précis et utilisez des mots de liaison pour plus de cohérence. Évitez les hésitations («uh», «but we can't but») et simplifiez la structure: mentionnez où les vélos sont populaires, pourquoi et donnez un exemple concret (lieux, moments, groupes de personnes).

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular. Although you don't see many people cycling in busy city streets, many residents ride bicycles along the Han River park for exercise and leisure, especially on weekends and in the evenings.

× I would say yes, we cannot often see, uh, people riding bikes on, uh, on the streets, but we can't but uh, if we go to the park of Han River.

✓ I would say yes. We do not often see people riding bikes on the streets, but we can if we go to the Han River park.

The original sentence has several issues: awkward word order, unnecessary repetition, and informal fillers. The primary grammatical issue that matches the provided list is 'Verb + -ing form' because 'riding' is used correctly but the surrounding structure is incorrect. Corrections made: (1) Replaced colloquial 'we cannot often see' with 'we do not often see' for correct negative frequency expression in present simple. (2) Removed redundant 'but we can't but uh' and clarified the contrast with 'but we can if we go to the Han River park.' This keeps the present simple tense consistent and makes the meaning clear. Suggestion: Avoid fillers (uh), use 'do/does' for negatives in present simple, and place adverbs of frequency (often) before the main verb ('do not often see'). Use a clear contrasting clause linked by 'but'.