自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You misunderstood the question and repeated it instead of answering. Give a direct personal response (topic sentence) and add one or two brief supporting details. Keep it natural, avoid repeating the examiner, and limit to up to 5 sentences. For example, say whether you had a bike, mention your age when you got it or how often you rode it, and include a short reason or memory to make it specific.

範例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven and rode it almost every day after school. I especially remember riding around the park with my friends because it was a fun way to exercise and spend time outdoors.

建議: Your answer is brief and has grammar and word-choice errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because, for example, and so). Correct grammar (use 'ride' or 'use' rather than 'drive' for bikes) and avoid absolute statements like 'everyone'. Provide a short example or reason to support your view.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in cities many residents prefer cycling to avoid traffic and save money. However, not everyone rides a bike — some people still use cars or public transport.

× Hello, did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question as a reply, which is a sentence structure error (type 26). The response should directly answer the question. Use past tense 'had' and 'was' to match the time frame. Suggestion: Give a brief direct answer first (Yes/No) and then a supporting sentence, e.g. 'Yes. I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Everyone in my country just drive bike.

✓ Everyone in my country just drives a bike.

The subject 'Everyone' is singular, so the verb must be singular 'drives' (type 27). Also, the count noun 'bike' requires an article 'a' (article error type 22). The adverb 'just' is acceptable but 'usually' or 'often' may be more natural. Suggestion: Use singular verb with singular subject and include the article: 'Everyone in my country just drives a bike.'