自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a short reason or example. Avoid repetition and use a linking word if you add details. For example, say you owned a bike and explain how often you used it and why you didn’t use it much (safety, location, interests).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I rarely used it because our neighborhood was quite hilly and I found it difficult to ride, so I usually preferred walking or playing indoors.

建議: Make your answer clearer and more precise. Start with a direct opinion, then support it with specific reasons and use linking words (for example, because, for instance, however). Avoid vague or unclear phrases. Mention particular groups who use bikes, typical purposes (commuting, recreation) and any relevant context (traffic, bike lanes).

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities like Istanbul. For instance, many commuters use them to avoid traffic jams, and there has been an increase in bike lanes and rental schemes in recent years.

× Yes I had, but I I was rarely using my bike.

✓ Yes, I had one, but I rarely used my bike.

The original has two problems: unnecessary repetition ('I I') and incorrect past continuous 'was rarely using' for a habitual past action. Use simple past 'used' to describe a repeated or habitual action in the past. Also add 'one' or a comma after 'Yes' to sound natural. Suggestion: use simple past for past habits (I used, I didn't use).

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because especially in Istanbul, all the people are using back in every way.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially in Istanbul, because many people use them in every way.

Problems: awkward word order and incorrect pronoun/reference ('using back' is incorrect). 'All the people' is unnatural; use 'many people' or 'people' and refer to bikes with the pronoun 'them'. Use simple present 'use' to describe a general truth. Reorder the sentence to place 'especially in Istanbul' correctly and replace 'using back in every way' with 'use them in every way' to convey the intended meaning.