自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: حاول أن تكون إجابتك منظمة وواضحة أكثر: ابدأ بجملة موضوع مباشرة (نعم/لا + لمحة قصيرة)، ثم أضف تفاصيل محددة زمنية ومكانية واستخدم روابط بسيطة مثل “because” أو “so”. ركّز على تصريف الأفعال (ماضي بسيطة) وعبّر عن المدة بشكل صحيح. مثلاً صِف متى اشتريت الدراجة، مع من تعلمت، وكم استغرق التعلم.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I bought it when I was eight years old, and I learned to ride it with my brothers. It took me about three months to feel confident, because we practiced in the park next to our house every weekend.

建議: أجب بوضوح وبعبارة موضوعية مع دعم الرأي بأسباب محددة وأمثلة. ابدأ بجملة رأي مباشرة ثم اعطِ سببين أو مثال واحد واضح مستخدماً روابط مثل “because” أو “however”. تجنّب التكرار والكلمات الاحتياطية (uh). استخدم كلمة جمع صحيحة (cars) وصياغة صحيحة للجملة.

範例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars because distances between places are long and public infrastructure is built for cars. However, bicycles are becoming more common in some cities where there are bike lanes and traffic is heavy.

× Of course I buy it when you want a child.

✓ Of course I bought one when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'buy' but the question asks about the past. Use simple past 'bought' for completed actions in the past and change 'you want a child' (incorrect phrase) to 'I was a child' to match meaning. Also use 'one' (a bike) instead of 'it' for natural reference. Suggestion: use past tense verbs and personal subject 'I' consistently: 'I bought one when I was a child.'

× With my brothers I was learning a three month and I do it.

✓ I learned to ride with my brothers over three months, and I still ride now.

The original mixes tenses and incorrect verb forms. 'Was learning' can be acceptable but 'learned' (simple past) is clearer for completed learning. 'A three month' is missing nouns and prepositions; use 'over three months' or 'in three months'. 'I do it' is vague; replace with 'I still ride now' if the student means they continue to ride. Suggestion: use correct past tense 'learned' and proper time expression 'over three months.'

× No, it's not uh, because, uh, we use cars every day, uh, bikes.

✓ No, they are not popular because we use cars every day instead of bikes.

The student uses 'it's not' and an unclear fragment 'bikes.' The subject should be 'they' referring to 'bikes' (plural) and present simple 'are not popular' describes a general truth. Also clarify contrast with 'cars' using 'instead of.' Suggestion: match the pronoun number to 'bikes' and use present simple for habitual actions: 'they are not popular because we use cars every day instead of bikes.'

× It's not important in our country because we use car.

✓ They are not important in our country because we use cars.

The sentence has several issues: 'It's' (singular) mismatches 'bikes' (plural) and 'use car' is missing plural 'cars' or an article. Use 'they are not important' and plural 'cars.' Suggestion: ensure noun-number agreement and correct article/plural usage: 'cars' for general plural reference.