自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, use past tense for childhood, give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (use 'didn't' and 'when I was a child').

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I never learned how to ride, so my parents didn’t buy one for me. As a result, I usually walked or took public transport to school.

建議: Start with a clear opinion, use natural phrasing and provide specific supporting details or examples with linking words (for example, reasons, comparisons). Correct word order and choice (say 'bicycles are popular' or 'bikes are popular', and 'people prefer to travel by bike').

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short trips to work or the market because they are cheap and convenient, and bike lanes in cities make cycling safer.

× No, I don't have any kind of bike because I don't have knowledge.

✓ No, I didn't have any kind of bike because I didn't have any knowledge about them.

The question asked about the past (when you were a child), so present tense 'don't have' is incorrect. Use past tense 'didn't have'. Also 'any kind of bike' is awkward; 'any' with plural 'them' or 'bikes' is better, and 'knowledge' needs a determiner 'any knowledge about them'. Suggestion: Use past tense consistently and plural when talking generally (e.g., 'I didn't have any bikes and didn't know how to ride them').

× No, I don't have any kind of bike when I was there because I don't have knowledge about the bike and I don't know how we can start and how we can stop.

✓ No, I didn't have any bike when I was there because I didn't have any knowledge about bikes and I didn't know how to start or stop riding.

This sentence mixes present tense ('don't have', 'don't know') with a past time reference ('when I was there'). Change verbs to past tense ('didn't have', 'didn't know'). Also correct count and wording: 'any kind of bike' -> 'any bike'; 'knowledge about the bike' -> 'knowledge about bikes'; 'how we can start and how we can stop' -> 'how to start or stop riding' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent with the time reference and use infinitive 'how to' for expressing procedures.

× It's definitely bikes are popular in my country and many people prefer to visit with the help of bike in my nation.

✓ Bikes are definitely popular in my country, and many people prefer to travel by bike.

'It's definitely bikes are popular' is ungrammatical—either 'It's definitely true that bikes are popular' or simply 'Bikes are definitely popular'. 'Visit with the help of bike' is incorrect pronoun/phrase use; 'travel by bike' or 'go by bike' is natural. Also use plural 'bikes' and article omission for general statements. Suggestion: Use a clear subject ('Bikes') and natural preposition 'by' to indicate means of travel; simplify the clause order for clarity.