自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 答えをもっと明確にし、文法と語順の誤りを直してください。簡潔なトピック文を述べた後、理由や状況を具体的に一つか二つ挙げてください。接続語（because, so, and, however）を用いて文をつなぎ、発音を落ち着いてはっきりさせると良いです。例えば「私の家族は運転免許や自転車を良く思わないから持っていなかった」など簡潔に述べましょう。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents didn’t encourage cycling because they didn’t have a driving license and worried about safety, so we rarely went out by bike.

建議: 意見を明確に述べ、理由を具体的に一つか二つ示してください。繰り返しや文法ミスを避け、接続詞（because, so, therefore）で理由をつなぎ、名詞と形容詞の一致に注意してください。文は短め（最大5文）で簡潔に保ちましょう。例えば「自転車は近年増えている。通勤に便利で安価だから」など。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country. Many people choose bicycles because they are inexpensive and convenient for short commutes, so urban cycling has increased in recent years.

× No. My family hasn't talked about like because they don't have a license to light and they don't they don't like to ride the bike go stay. It it's looks looked like not good.

✓ No. My family hasn't talked about it because they don't have a driver's license and they don't like to ride bikes. It looks like it's not good.

Student used incorrect and repeated pronouns and unclear phrases. 'talked about like' is ungrammatical; use 'talked about it'. 'license to light' is incorrect word choice; use 'driver's license'. Repetition 'they don't they don't' should be cleaned. 'ride the bike go stay' is nonsensical; use 'ride bikes'. 'It it's looks looked like not good' mixes tenses and forms; use present 'It looks like it's not good'. Suggestions: replace vague phrases with clear nouns/pronouns, remove repetitions, and keep consistent tense and word choice. Suggested practice: write simple sentences replacing unclear fragments, then combine into a clear sentence, e.g., 'They don't have a driver's license, so they don't ride bikes.'

× I think my country is a is a becoming more more and more popular the bikes.

✓ I think bikes are becoming more and more popular in my country.

Original sentence has word order problems and incorrect agreement: 'the bikes' with 'becoming...popular' is awkward and 'is a is a becoming' is wrong. Correct structure places subject 'bikes' before verb 'are becoming' and uses plural verb 'are' to agree with plural 'bikes'. Also move 'in my country' to the end for natural order. Suggestions: identify the subject (bikes) and ensure the verb agrees in number; remove filler words and redundancies.

× Because the bikes is usually light easily and.

✓ Because bikes are usually lightweight and easy to use.

'the bikes is' has number and article issues and 'light easily' mixes adjective/adverb incorrectly. Use plural 'bikes are' and the adjective 'lightweight' (or 'light') plus adjective phrase 'easy to use'. Also remove the trailing conjunction 'and' or complete the sentence. Suggestions: choose correct adjective forms and parallel structure (adjective + conjunction + adjective phrase).