自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, use correct grammar and a clear sequence. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct tense and pronouns, and add one or two specific details linked logically (use linking words like "but" or "however"). Avoid redundant phrases and unclear expressions.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family bought a bike for my older brother later, and I learned to ride it with him, so we often shared it. However, I didn't have my own bike until I was a teenager.

建議: Give a clear direct answer, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Correct vocabulary (e.g., "public transport" not "public transports") and use natural phrases. Add a brief example or comparison to strengthen the response.

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, most people prefer public transport such as buses and trains because the roads are crowded and cycling infrastructure is limited. As a result, few people use bicycles for daily travel.

× No, I didn't have a bike at that side because maybe I didn't.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike at that time because maybe I didn't want one.

The phrase 'at that side' is incorrect for referring to time; use 'at that time'. Also the clause 'maybe I didn't' is incomplete—missing an object/verb (e.g. 'want one'). Ensure past tense structure remains consistent for past events.

× I have never wanted one.

✓ I never wanted one.

The present perfect 'have never wanted' is not the best choice when talking about a past period (childhood). Use simple past 'never wanted' to match the past context established by the question.

× But later my family bought for my elder brother and I started learning on through to write on it and then we shared with my brother.

✓ But later my family bought one for my elder brother, and I started learning to ride it; then we shared it.

Multiple problems: incorrect word order and extra words ('bought for my elder brother' should be 'bought one for my elder brother'); 'learning on through to write on it' is ungrammatical—use 'learning to ride it'; pronoun usage 'we shared with my brother' is redundant—use 'we shared it'. Also add proper punctuation and conjunctions to clarify sequence.

× No, I don't think so because most people don't prefer riding bikes in my country.

✓ No, I don't think so because most people do not prefer riding bikes in my country.

This sentence is mostly correct, but avoid contractions for formality; keep present simple 'do not prefer' to describe a general present habit. Ensure subject-verb agreement with 'most people do not prefer'.

× They usually rely on public transports when they want to communicate somewhere.

✓ They usually rely on public transport when they want to go somewhere.

Use 'public transport' (uncountable) rather than 'public transports'. The verb 'communicate' is incorrect in this context—use 'go' to indicate traveling. Also 'when they want to go somewhere' is the natural collocation.