自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你重复了考官的话而没有直接回答问题。注意直接给出主题句（有或没有），然后用一到两句具体细节支持。例如说明什么时候有、谁送的、骑车的频率或感受。回答应自然、简洁，不超过五句，使用连接词如“because”或“so”。

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, and my parents bought it for me as a birthday present. I rode it almost every day after school because it was my main way to play with friends and explore the neighborhood.

建議: 你再次复述了问题而没有给出任何观点或细节。应先直接表达观点（例如：Yes, they are quite popular / No, not really），然後用具体理由和例子支持，比如提到通勤习惯、自行车道建设或共享单车的普及，使用连接词如“because”或“for example”。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and there are numerous bike-sharing programs. For example, in big cities you can often see dedicated bike lanes and crowded rental stations during rush hour.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

该句为考官的问题的重复，结构本身没有语法错误，因此不需要改正。保持原句即可。

× Do you think bikes are popular in the country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

原句使用了“the country”，在此语境下听起来不自然且含糊。考官原问“in your country”，表示询问听者所在国家的普遍情况，应该使用所有格代词“your”来指代听者所属的国家。建议：当询问与听者相关的国家或区域时，用“your”表示所属；避免用“the”来替代所有格，除非明确指特定已知的国家（例如“The country has a problem”指前文已提及的那个国家）。