自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is too short, contains a verb tense error and lacks detail. Use past tense for a past-time question, give a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and under 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle with training wheels when I was about six, and I used it to ride to the park every weekend. Because it was light and easy to control, I learned to ride without help within a few weeks.

建議: You did not answer the question and instead introduced yourself, which is inappropriate for the examiner’s prompt. Directly answer the question with a clear opinion, then add a reason or example using linking words. Stay on topic and keep responses concise.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in my city there are bike lanes and several bike-sharing programs, so cycling is a convenient option for daily travel.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense. The student answered using the present tense 'I do,' which is inconsistent. Use the past tense 'I did' to match the past-time reference. Suggestion: Listen for the tense in the question and respond with the same tense (past simple) when describing past situations.

× Hello, my name is Joshua G and what's yours please?

✓ Hello, my name is Joshua G. What's your name, please?

The original is a run-on combining an introduction and a question without proper punctuation and uses an informal word order. Split into two sentences and use the polite question form 'What's your name, please?' Also capitalize and punctuate correctly. Suggestion: Separate statements and questions with a period and use the standard question phrase for asking someone's name politely.