自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: حاول تنظيم إجابتك لتكون أكثر سلاسة ودقة: ابدأ بجملة موضوعية قصيرة تذكر فيها أن لديك دراجة ثم أضف تفاصيل محددة بترتيب منطقي واستخدم روابط (مثل: then, after that, so) لتوضيح التسلسل. انتبه للزمن واستخدم صياغات زمنية متسقة (مثلاً: I used to…, I would…). كما حسّن القواعد البسيطة وترتيب الكلمات (مثال: a red bike, my father bought it for me).

範例: Yes, I had a red bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I learned to ride it on our street. I used to visit my friends and sometimes ride to the park. I would ride it almost every weekend because it was great fun.

建議: اجعل إجابتك أوضح وأكثر دقة وأضف تفاصيل داعمة. ابدأ بجملة مباشرة تعبر عن رأيك ثم قدّم أمثلة أو أسباب قصيرة تدعم رأيك. انتبه أيضاً إلى الضمائر وصياغة الجمل (مثال: Yes, they are; I often see people riding bikes).

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. In cities like Dubai and Abu Dhabi I often see many people cycling in parks and along dedicated bike paths. Many people use bikes for exercise or short trips around their neighbourhoods.

× It was more red bike and my father bought for me and I learned to ride it in our street.

✓ It was a red bike, and my father bought it for me, and I learned to ride it on our street.

The sentence has article and pronoun errors: 'more red bike' is incorrect for describing color; use the article 'a' plus adjective before noun: 'a red bike'. Also 'bought for me' needs the object pronoun 'it' before 'for me': 'bought it for me'. Use preposition 'on our street' for riding location. Combine clauses with commas and 'and' for clarity.

× I used to visit my friends and sometimes I go to park and I rode almost every weekend because it was fun.

✓ I used to visit my friends, and sometimes I went to the park, and I rode it almost every weekend because it was fun.

This sentence mixes past habitual 'used to' with present 'go' and simple past 'rode'. Maintain past tense throughout: change 'go' to 'went' and add 'the' before 'park'. Also specify 'rode it' to clarify what was ridden.

× Yes it is. Every time I go to Dubai or Abu Dhabi I always tell people riding bikes.

✓ Yes, they are. Every time I go to Dubai or Abu Dhabi, I always see people riding bikes.

The question asked about bikes (plural), so use plural agreement 'they are' instead of 'it is'. The second clause 'I always tell people riding bikes' is incorrect; likely meaning 'I always see people riding bikes' — use verb 'see' and keep present simple for habitual action. Add commas for clarity.