自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid filler phrases like “As for me.” You could briefly say why you didn’t have one or mention an alternative you used to give the answer more depth.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus because my family lived in a busy city and it felt safer to use public transport.

建議: Make the response grammatically smoother and more specific. Begin with a clear opinion, use linking words (for example, because, however), and provide one concrete reason or example. Mention where bikes might be used to show nuance.

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer faster transport like cars, buses or trains. However, bicycles are common in small towns or among people who want exercise or cheaper travel.

× As for me, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.

The original sentence has an unnecessary introductory phrase 'As for me' which is redundant and makes the sentence awkward. This is a sentence structure issue. Removing 'As for me' yields a clearer, more natural response that fits the question's past-tense context. Suggestion: Start directly with the time phrase 'When I was a child' or simply 'I didn't have a bike.'

× I think in my country bikes are not popular because we have a car, a bus and plane and train and they help us moving faster.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country because we have cars, buses, planes and trains, and they help us move faster.

There are several issues: wrong word order for the prepositional phrase ('in my country' should follow 'popular' or be placed earlier), incorrect articles and singular/plural forms ('a car, a bus and plane and train' should be plural when speaking generally), and incorrect verb form after 'help' ('help us move' not 'help us moving'). These fall under preposition use and also singular/plural and verb form problems. Suggestions: Place 'in my country' in the natural position, use plural nouns for general statements (cars, buses, planes, trains), and use the base form of the verb after 'help' (move).