自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar (use past tense consistently), make the answer more natural and concise, and add a brief supporting detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting points using a linking word.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family was quite poor. However, I often walked long distances to school, so I learned to be independent and save money for small things.

建議: Correct grammar and word choice (use 'people' instead of 'guys', remove repetition), use linking words for coherence, and give one specific example or comparison. Keep to under five sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people cannot afford cars. Moreover, in rural areas where distances to markets and schools are long, bicycles are an affordable and practical way to travel.

× 'No, I don't have a bike when I was a child because our family was very poor and my father was not able to afford it.'

✓ 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because our family was very poor and my father was not able to afford one.'

'The sentence mixes present simple (do not have) with a past time reference (when I was a child). Use past simple "didn't have" to match the past context. Also, use the pronoun "one" instead of repeating "it" for naturalness when referring to a bike.'

× 'Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because guys have an average income and they cannot afford car.'

✓ 'Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people have an average income and they cannot afford a car.'

'The original uses "guys" which is informal and ambiguous; "many people" is more appropriate. Also, the noun "car" requires an article in this context: use "a car." The sentence otherwise uses present tense correctly.'

× 'Places are very far away so we require to cover a long distance and bikes are are an easy medium of transport or mode of transport to cover that distance.'

✓ 'Places are very far away, so we need to cover long distances and bikes are an easy mode of transport to do that.'

'Require to cover' is incorrect here; use "need to cover" or "have to cover." Use plural "long distances" because "places" is plural. Remove the duplicated "are" and choose a single natural phrase: "mode of transport." Replace "to cover that distance" with the concise "to do that."'}]}