自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct past-tense answer, expand with one or two specific supporting details, and avoid grammatical errors. Use a topic sentence (past tense) and then add a brief detail or reason using a linking word. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents gave me when I was seven, and I rode it to visit my friends every afternoon. Because it was lightweight and had training wheels, I learned to balance quickly and gained a lot of confidence.

建議: Answer directly using plural and correct grammar, then provide a specific reason or example using a linking word (e.g., because, for example, therefore). Keep the response concise and coherent, up to five sentences.

範例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in my city there are dedicated bike lanes and weekly community cycling events that encourage people to ride.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past-time question ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?') so the response must use past tense. 'Have' is present tense and does not match the past auxiliary 'did'. Use 'did' for short answers to past simple questions (Yes, I did). Alternatively, 'Yes, I had.' is also correct. To improve, match the tense of your short answer to the question by using the past simple form.

× Yes, it is popular in our country and.

✓ Yes, they are popular in our country.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural), so the pronoun and verb must agree in number. 'It is' is singular and does not match the plural noun 'bikes'. Use 'they are' for plural subjects. Also the sentence ended with 'and' which is incomplete; remove the trailing conjunction or complete the sentence. For clarity, say: 'Yes, they are popular in our country.' To improve, identify the referent (bikes) and ensure pronoun and verb agree in number, and avoid leaving sentences unfinished.