自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答过于简短，未能直接展开。应先用完整句子直接回答问题，然后给出一两句具体细节（如什么时候有、谁买的、常去哪儿骑），用连接词使表达连贯。注意句子不要超过5句。

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven; my parents bought it for my birthday and I used to ride it to the park every weekend.

建議: 表达含糊且语法不准确。应先给直接观点句，再用具体原因或例子支持，并使用连词（for example, because, so）使逻辑清晰。注意词汇搭配（e.g. “more people like bikes”或“bicycles are becoming more popular”）。保持不超过5句。

範例: I think bicycles are becoming more popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes, for example students and office workers who want to avoid traffic and save money.

× Actually I don't know, but I think the more people like bike.

✓ Actually I don't know, but I think more people like bikes.

问题类型：量词/可数名词使用错误（Incorrect use of quantifiers）。 解释（简体中文）：原句中 “the more people like bike” 有两个问题：1) 名词“bike”为可数名词，表示泛指时应使用复数形式“bikes”；2) 定冠词“the”在这里不应该用于“the more people”，因为句子想表达的是一般趋势“更多的人喜欢自行车”，而不是用“the”引出比较结构（如“the more... the more...”）。建议改为 “more people like bikes”。 改进建议： - 记住可数名词表示泛指时要用复数形式（a bike 指一辆，bikes 指自行车这一类）。 - 当表达“更多的人……”时直接用“more people”而不是“the more people”。 - 多读真实语料中的类似表达，例如 “More people use public transport.” 来巩固用法。