自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: The response is incorrect grammatically and too short. Answer directly with past tense and a full sentence, then briefly explain why. Use a topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid repetition and keep it natural.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a busy city and my parents preferred that I walk or use public transport for safety reasons.

建議: The answer is unclear and repetitive. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, so, however). Keep sentences concise and avoid fillers like 'uh' or repeated words.

範例: Not really — cars are far more popular in my country because public infrastructure and long distances make driving more practical. For example, many families own at least one car, so cycling is usually seen as a leisure activity rather than a daily commute.

× No, I am not.

✓ No, I didn't.

The examiner asked 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' which uses past simple. The student's reply should use past simple negation. 'I am not' is present tense and uses a copular verb incorrectly. Use 'I didn't' (short for 'I did not') to negate past possession: 'No, I didn't.' Alternatively 'No, I didn't have one.' would be clearer.

× Not really. However, back in my in my country it is not essential one with, with, with variety of people.

✓ Not really. In my country, bicycles are not essential for many people.

The student repeats 'back in my in my' and uses 'back' which suggests past but the question is general about popularity, so present tense is appropriate. The phrase 'it is not essential one with, with, with variety of people' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use plural subject 'bicycles' with present simple 'are not essential' to express a general truth. Also remove filler words and correct word order: 'In my country, bicycles are not essential for many people.'

× The most important in my country, uh, transportation by cars.

✓ The most important mode of transportation in my country is cars.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb and misorders noun phrases. Use the noun phrase 'mode of transportation' with the definite article 'the' and complete the sentence with the verb 'is'. 'Transportation by cars' is awkward; 'is cars' or better 'is private cars' would be natural. A smoother alternative: 'The most important mode of transportation in my country is the private car.'