自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct response (yes/no or short statement) with a brief supporting detail. Keep it natural, up to 3–4 sentences, and use linking words if you add details.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was six, and I learned to ride it in our neighborhood park. Because I practiced almost every day, I became confident riding on quiet streets by the time I was eight.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors, hesitation and is slightly repetitive. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement) and remove filler words like “uh.”

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are affordable and easy to park, so you see them everywhere, especially in cities and small towns.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because uh, the majority of vehicles the population of this country use is bikes only.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because most people in this country use only bikes.

The original sentence has sentence structure and subject-verb agreement problems: 'the majority of vehicles the population of this country use is bikes only' is ungrammatical. 'Majority of vehicles' conflicts with 'population' and verb agreement. Correction uses 'most people' as a clear subject and 'use only bikes' to convey exclusivity. Suggestion: simplify complex noun phrases, ensure subject matches verb number, and place modifiers (only) next to the word they modify.