自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear, grammatical, and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence addressing the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and possessive forms (e.g., 'my family couldn't afford'). Avoid repetition and correct subject-verb agreement. For example, say you didn’t have a bike, state the reason briefly, and add one detail about how that affected you.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. As a result, I often walked to school and sometimes borrowed a neighbour's bike on weekends.

建議: Answer directly, then support with clear, specific reasons and use linking words. Improve word choice (e.g., 'young people use bikes for commuting and leisure') and correct grammar. Keep it to 2–3 sentences, and include one concrete example or trend to make the response convincing.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many young people use them to commute to work and university. For example, in my city you can see bike lanes full of cyclists during rush hour, especially among students and office workers.

× Well, no, I don't didn't have a bike when I was a child because at the time my family's cannot afford those expensive bike and I were not able to ride ride.

✓ Well, no, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because at that time my family couldn't afford those expensive bikes and I was not able to ride one.

Errors: 'don't didn't' is a double auxiliary; use simple past 'didn't'. 'my family's cannot afford' mixes present with past; use past 'couldn't' (or 'could not') to match 'when I was a child'. 'those expensive bike' has plural mismatch; use 'bikes'. 'I were not able' wrong subject-verb agreement in past; use 'I was not able'. Repeated 'ride ride' is redundant; use 'ride one' or just 'ride'. Suggestions: Use simple past consistently for past situations, ensure subject-verb agreement, match noun number with determiner, and avoid duplicate words.

× Yes I do, obviously I think by popular in my country because nowadays most of the youths are huge bikes for visiting are going here and there for their walks and office lots of.

✓ Yes, I do. Obviously I think bikes are popular in my country because nowadays many young people use bikes to go here and there for walks and to get to the office.

Errors: 'I think by popular' has wrong word order and noun form; should be 'bikes are popular'. 'most of the youths' is awkward; use 'many young people' or 'most young people'. 'are huge bikes' is incorrect verb and adjective use; probably intended 'use bikes'. 'for visiting are going here and there' is ungrammatical and redundant; simplify to 'to go here and there'. 'office lots of' is incorrect; use 'to get to the office' or 'for commuting to work'. Suggestions: Use correct subject-verb order, choose appropriate nouns ('young people' instead of 'youths' in many contexts), use 'use' for employing a means of transport, and keep phrases concise and parallel.