自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap kısa ve anlaşılır, ancak daha doğal ve zengin hale getirilebilir. Önce doğrudan yanıt verin, ardından bir veya iki cümleyle hatırladığınız ayrıntıları ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (for example, and, because) kullanarak cümleleri birbirine bağlayın. Ayrıca “yeah” yerine daha nötr “Yes” veya “Yes, I did” kullanmak daha resmi ve uygun olur.

範例: Yes, I did. It was a small yellow bike that I rode to my friend’s house every afternoon, and I remember I decorated it with stickers because I loved bright colors.

建議: Cevap anlaşılır ama dilbilgisi ve akıcılık eksikleri var. Öncelikle özne-fiil uyumuna dikkat edin ("they are" ya da "bikes are"). Belirsiz ifadeleri netleştirin ve örnek verin. Bağlaçlarla fikirlerinizi genişletin (for example, because, so) ve gereksiz duraksamalardan kaçının.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many cities have dedicated bike lanes and people often use them for short trips. For example, I often see commuters cycling to work in the mornings, so it’s a common and convenient way to travel.

× Yes, it is. Uh, we have ***** ******* actually, and we ride a bike there and we can use it as transportation.

✓ Yes, they are. Uh, we have ***** ******* actually, and we ride bikes there and we can use them as transportation.

The student uses singular pronouns and verbs ('it is', 'a bike', 'it as transportation') to refer to 'bikes' which is plural in context. Change 'it is' to 'they are' to agree with the plural subject 'bikes'. Use plural nouns and pronouns: 'ride bikes' and 'use them' instead of 'ride a bike' and 'use it'. This fixes pronoun and number agreement. Additionally, ensure consistency by keeping plural forms when speaking generally about bikes.