自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the mistake and answer directly, use a clear topic sentence and a brief supporting detail. Avoid unrelated words (e.g. “wife”) and keep sentences natural and grammatical. Use one or two linking words if adding detail (for example, “and” or “which”).

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bicycle when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon. It had a little basket on the front, which I decorated with ribbons.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then add a specific reason or example. Use correct subject-verb agreement and linking words (for example, “because” or “for example”) to connect ideas. Keep to 2–3 sentences for naturalness.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short journeys. For example, many families, including mine, use bicycles to travel to the local market or school.

× Yes, I have a wife.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The student answered the question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' but used 'I have a wife,' which is an incorrect and unrelated pronoun/noun usage and present-tense verb form. The correct response should refer to the bike in the past ('had'). Suggestion: keep subject consistent and use the past tense 'had' when referring to childhood possessions.

× When I was a child I remember it was color pink.

✓ When I was a child, I remember it was pink in color.

The phrase 'color pink' is incorrect word order and usage. Use the adjective 'pink' to describe the bike and place it after the verb: 'it was pink' or 'it was pink in color.' Also add a comma after the dependent clause 'When I was a child' for clarity. Suggestion: say 'When I was a child, I remember it was pink.' or '...it was pink in color.'

× Yeah, me and my siblings likes to ride a bike.

✓ Yeah, my siblings and I like to ride bikes.

There are three issues: pronoun order and case ('me and my siblings' should be 'my siblings and I'), subject-verb agreement ('likes' should be 'like' for the plural subject), and article/number with 'bike' (use plural 'bikes' when speaking generally). Suggestion: use 'my siblings and I like to ride bikes' for correct pronoun case, agreement, and general plural meaning.