自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For a higher score, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep your response natural and within about 3–5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels from age five, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because my parents encouraged me to practice every weekend, I became confident riding without help by the time I was seven.

建議: Your answer is short and contains inaccurate/odd vocabulary (BMWs and Toyota are car brands, and 'BMX BMWs' is confusing). To improve, state your opinion clearly, then support it with specific, relevant examples or reasons using linking words (for example, because, for instance, as a result). Use appropriate vocabulary for bicycle types and contexts.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use commuter bicycles and e-bikes for short trips because they are cheaper and avoid traffic. Additionally, cycling clubs and bike-sharing schemes have become more common in recent years, which encourages more people to ride.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Usually you get BMX BMWs and Toyota is starting to make some bikes.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Usually you get BMX bikes, and Toyota has started to make some bikes.

The phrase 'BMX BMWs' incorrectly mixes a bicycle type (BMX) with an automobile brand (BMW). This is a vocabulary/word-choice error which fits best under incorrect use of adjectives/words (type 13). Also, 'is starting to make' can be improved to 'has started to make' to match the present perfect progressive idea: it indicates a recent change that began in the past and continues now. Use a comma before 'and' to join independent clauses. Suggestion: use 'BMX bikes' to refer to that bicycle style and 'Toyota has started to make some bikes' to describe a recent development.