自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Улучшите связность и грамматику: начните с чёткого тематического предложения, используйте правильные времена (past simple) и сократите повторы. Добавьте одно или два конкретных детализационных предложения и свяжите их связующими словами (for example, because, so). Избегайте ненужных повторов словосочетания "ride a bike" несколько раз подряд.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I couldn't ride it at first, but I learned slowly and finally managed to ride on my own when I was eleven. For example, my older cousin helped me practice in the park every weekend, so I became confident after a few months.

建議: Сделайте ответ более структурированным и конкретным: начните с прямого мнения, затем приведите 1–2 конкретные причины и пример. Используйте связующие слова (however, because, for example) и корректную лексику (adults, infrastructure, prefer). Избегайте повторов и исправьте грамматические ошибки (например, "adults prefer", "children ride bikes").

範例: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Adults rarely cycle because the roads lack bike lanes and it's often unsafe. For example, most people prefer cars or buses for commuting, so mainly children ride bikes in parks rather than adults using them for transport.

× Yes I did. I have bike when I was a child but I couldn't.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, but I couldn't ride it at first.

The student mixed present and past tenses. 'I have bike when I was a child' should use past tense 'had' to match 'when I was a child'. Also articles are missing ('a bike'), and 'couldn't' needs an object or verb: 'couldn't ride it' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: use consistent past tense and include articles and verbs where needed.

× I didn't drive bike until I was 11 years old.

✓ I didn't ride a bike until I was 11 years old.

The verb 'drive' is incorrect for bicycles; use 'ride'. Also the noun needs an article: 'a bike'. The negative past tense 'didn't' is correct, so keep past tense consistent. Suggestion: use appropriate verb 'ride' and include the article.

× I was trying to learn to ride a bike for a long time and I only started to ride bike alone like when I was 11 years old.

✓ I tried for a long time to learn to ride a bike, and I only started riding a bike on my own when I was 11 years old.

Mixing past progressive and simple past is acceptable but structure is awkward. 'I was trying to learn to ride a bike for a long time' is wordy; 'I tried for a long time to learn' is clearer. Use 'riding' or 'to ride' consistently and include articles ('a bike'). 'Alone' is better expressed as 'on my own'. Remove filler 'like'. Suggestion: simplify to clear past tense structures and use correct articles and phrases.

× I don't think it's popular in my country.

✓ I don't think it's popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present simple appropriately to express a general opinion. No change needed.

× I think. I don't think adult population prefer to ride a bike.

✓ I don't think the adult population prefers to ride bikes.

Problems: extraneous 'I think.' fragment and subject-verb agreement. Use 'the adult population' or 'adults' as subject; with singular collective noun 'population' use singular verb 'prefers'. Also 'ride a bike' is better as plural 'ride bikes' when speaking generally. Suggestion: remove fragments and ensure subject and verb agree.

× Only children in my opinion mostly prefer to ride parks.

✓ In my opinion, only children mostly prefer to ride in parks.

Word order and preposition use are incorrect. 'In my opinion' should come at start or end; 'prefer to ride parks' is wrong—use 'ride in parks'. Also 'only children mostly prefer' sounds awkward; better: 'mostly children prefer to ride in parks.' Suggestion: place adverbial phrase correctly and use 'in' with 'parks'.

× Only children I see mostly children rides bike in my country.

✓ Mostly I see only children riding bikes in my country.

This sentence has redundant and disordered elements. Subject-verb agreement error: 'children rides' is incorrect. Use a clear subject and verb: 'I see mostly children riding bikes'. Include articles and plural 'bikes'. Suggestion: remove redundancy and match plural subject with plural verb or use gerund 'riding'.

× I think because we don't have enough infrastructure to ride a bike.

✓ I think it's because we don't have enough infrastructure for riding bikes.

Preposition and noun form: 'infrastructure to ride a bike' is understandable but more natural is 'infrastructure for riding bikes' or 'infrastructure for cycling'. Also include a dummy subject 'it's' after 'I think' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'for' + gerund or 'for' + noun, and 'cycling' as an alternative.