自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence and naturalness. Start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid minor grammar slips (e.g., “so many bikes” is fine but could be clarified; “my dad always bought it for me” should be “them” or “bikes”). Also vary vocabulary (e.g., “ride”, “cycle”, “enjoyed”).

範例: Yes — I had several bikes as a child because I loved cycling. For example, my father often bought me new bikes for special occasions, so I collected different types over the years and spent most afternoons riding around the neighborhood.

建議: The idea is communicated, but the sentence has grammar and fluency problems. Use a clear topic sentence, correct subject-verb agreement, and a linking phrase to support your reason. Be more specific (e.g., mention reasons such as distance, infrastructure, or climate). Use vocabulary like “motorbikes”, “common”, “less common”, and compare succinctly.

範例: Not really. In my country, motorbikes are far more common than bicycles because people often travel longer distances and the roads are designed for motorcycles. As a result, cycling is less popular except for leisure or sport.

× I used to have so many bikes when I was a kid because I loved biking and my dad always bought it for me.

✓ I used to have so many bikes when I was a kid because I loved biking and my dad always bought them for me.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers back to 'bikes' (plural). This is a singular and plural issue. Change 'it' to 'them' to match the plural noun 'bikes' and maintain correct pronoun agreement. Also acceptable: 'bought one for me' if referring to a single bike each time.

× I don't think so because most of people in my country they usually ride a motorcycle that don't really ride a bike like how Europeans do.

✓ I don't think so because most people in my country usually ride motorcycles and don't really ride bikes the way Europeans do.

There are multiple issues here, but per the provided list we correct singular/plural mismatches: 'most of people' should be 'most people' and 'a motorcycle' should be plural 'motorcycles' to agree with the general subject. Also 'they' is redundant and removed for clarity. 'Don't' must agree with plural subject 'people/motorcycles' which is correct in the correction. The phrase 'like how Europeans do' is made smoother as 'the way Europeans do.'