自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời trực tiếp. Cần trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng với câu chủ đề, sau đó nếu cần thêm chi tiết bổ sung (tối đa 5 câu). Sử dụng các liên từ khi nối thông tin và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: ai tặng, khi nào, sử dụng thế nào). Tránh lặp lại nguyên văn câu hỏi.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me on my seventh birthday, and I used it every day to ride to the park near our house. Because the park was close, I often went with my friends, which helped me become more confident and active.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn là một câu lặp lại và có lỗi ngữ pháp ("by" thay vì "be"). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, nêu quan điểm rồi đưa lý do và ví dụ cụ thể. Sử dụng từ nối để làm rõ mối quan hệ giữa ý tưởng (ví dụ: "because", "for example"). Giữ tối đa 5 câu, dùng từ vựng phù hợp như "popular", "common", "urban areas", "commuting".

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because traffic is heavy and parking is expensive. In addition, cycling has become more common for exercise and leisure over the past few years.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/use error. The response should be a statement in past tense to answer the question. Use past simple 'had' with subject 'I' to indicate possession in the past. Suggestion: begin with 'Yes, I had...' or 'No, I didn't have...' or a full affirmative sentence 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think by a popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student has multiple errors: wrong word 'by' instead of 'bikes', incorrect article usage and word order. The correct question asks about the subject 'bikes' and uses the verb 'are' with the adjective 'popular'. Suggestion: Use the plural noun 'bikes' as the subject, the verb 'are' for present tense plural, and place the adjective 'popular' after the verb: 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'