自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the reply more natural and grammatically correct by using a clear topic sentence, reducing redundancy, and adding one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Correct tense and pronoun errors, and avoid repeating words (e.g., 'when I was a child' and 'when I was a kid').

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it because my friends and I often cycled to the park or the market; as a result, we spent a lot of time outdoors and became quite confident riders.

建議: Provide a direct topic sentence, then give specific reasons with clear linking words. Fix grammar and fill incomplete thoughts. Avoid repetition and unclear terms (e.g., 'R bike'). Mention concrete examples or consequences to support your opinion.

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most cities lack dedicated bike lanes. Consequently, cycling feels unsafe on roads designed mainly for cars, so few people choose bikes for daily commuting.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child and I really like using my bike when I was a kid because me and my friends were always go somewhere with our bikes.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child, and I really liked using it because my friends and I were always going somewhere with our bikes.

Errors: mixture of past and present tense ('I really like' should be past to match 'when I was a child'); incorrect verb form after 'were' ('were always go' should be 'were always going'); incorrect word order in subject ('me and my friends' should be 'my friends and I'); repetitive phrases ('when I was a child' and 'when I was a kid' redundant). Suggestions: Maintain past tense for childhood events (use 'liked'), use the past continuous or past participle with -ing for habitual actions in the past ('were always going'), use subject pronoun order 'my friends and I', and remove redundant phrases to make the sentence concise.

× No, I don't think so, because in here there's no bike R bike roads in the streets. They're just we just have streets for cars and people to walk and there's.

✓ No, I don't think so, because here there are no bike lanes on the streets. We only have streets for cars and for people to walk on.

Errors: incorrect preposition and word choice ('in here' should be 'here'; 'in the streets' better as 'on the streets'); nonstandard phrase 'bike R bike roads' unclear — use 'bike lanes'; awkward repetition and incomplete sentence at the end. Suggestions: Use 'here' instead of 'in here', use 'there are' for existence with plural noun, use 'on the streets' for location, replace unclear phrase with 'bike lanes', and complete the sentence by clearly stating 'for people to walk on'.