自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and too short. Give a direct yes/no or brief statement, then add one or two supporting details. Use natural phrasing and avoid unrelated numbers. Speak in complete sentences and keep it under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me for my sixth birthday. I rode it every afternoon around the neighborhood and learned to balance on it within a few weeks.

建議: Your main idea is clear but the answer has many hesitations, repetitive phrases, and vague wording. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons or examples using linking words (because, for example, also). Keep sentences concise and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. One reason is that they are affordable and help people avoid traffic, so many commuters use them daily. For example, in my city you can see bicycle lanes and many students and workers riding to school or the office.

× The 25.

✓ No, I didn't. I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply 'The 25.' is unrelated to the question and lacks a verb and clear meaning (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Provide a full sentence that answers the yes/no question and uses the past tense 'didn't have' to match 'when you were a child.' Use 'No, I didn't' as a short answer or a complete sentence 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, of course it's true that bikes are uh very popular in my country because, umm uh, as these days bikes and uh, other transport is increasing day by day because the people uh, use uh, them all them more uh, so I think yeah.

✓ Yes, of course. Bikes are very popular in my country because, these days, bicycle and other modes of transport are being used more and more by people, so I think so.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect verb forms and agreement ('bikes ... are ... increasing' is awkward; 'other transport is increasing' should be 'other modes of transport are being used more' — subject-verb agreement and correct verb choice), redundant words ('them all them more'), and sentence structure problems (run-on with fillers). This falls under Subject-verb agreement (ID 27) and Sentence structure errors (ID 26). Use 'are being used more and more' or 'are used more and more' to express increasing usage, ensure plural subjects match plural verbs ('modes ... are'), remove fillers, and split into clearer clauses.