自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy, sentence structure and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and subject-verb agreement (e.g., "my parents wanted me to learn to ride"). Avoid redundancy and keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bike when I was a child because my parents wanted me to learn to ride. However, now that I am older I rarely cycle and usually take public transportation to get around because it is more convenient for my daily commute.

建議: Make the answer more precise and grammatically correct. Begin with a direct opinion, then give specific evidence or examples using linking words (e.g., "for example", "in particular"). Correct plural/singular agreement and awkward phrases (e.g., "10- to 15-year-old children"). Avoid vague or exaggerated terms like "extreme parkour" unless you explain them.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many 10- to 15-year-old children enjoy riding in parks and practicing tricks on ramps. In addition, cycling is common for short trips in cities because it is cheap and good exercise.

× Yes, I used to have a small pink bike because my parents want me to ride, but since now I grew older I don't need to use bicycles.

✓ Yes, I used to have a small pink bike because my parents wanted me to ride, but now that I have grown older I don't need to use a bicycle.

Multiple problems: 'want' should be past 'wanted' to match 'used to have' (past context) — this is a past tense issue (ID 5) but corrected here under the related clause; 'since now I grew older' is ungrammatical: use 'now that I have grown older' to express change from past to present (present perfect to show resulting state). 'bicycles' should be singular 'a bicycle' because the speaker refers to using that mode of transport in general in the present (singular/plural choice). Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent, use 'wanted' for past reasons, and 'now that I have grown older' to show present consequence. Ensure article use matches count and meaning.

× Yes, I used to have a small pink bike because my parents want me to ride, but since now I grew older I don't need to use bicycles.

✓ Yes, I used to have a small pink bike because my parents wanted me to ride, but now that I have grown older I don't need to use a bicycle.

The clause 'my parents want me to ride' mixes present tense with a past habitual 'used to'. The correct past tense is 'wanted' to express their intention at that time. Also 'since now I grew older' is incorrect sequence; use 'now that I have grown older'. Suggestion: align tense of subordinate clauses with the time frame of the main clause and use present perfect to describe a change that affects the present.

× Now I use a public transportation to reach my destination.

✓ Now I use public transportation to get to my destination.

'A public transportation' is incorrect because 'transportation' as an uncountable noun does not take 'a'. Remove the article. Also 'reach my destination' is acceptable but 'get to my destination' is more natural in spoken English. Suggestion: treat 'transportation' as uncountable and choose more natural verbs like 'get to'.

× Yes, bikes are pretty popular in my country, especially around from 10 to 15 years old year old kids who likes to do extreme parkour with their bikes in the park.

✓ Yes, bikes are pretty popular in my country, especially among 10- to 15-year-old kids who like to do extreme parkour with their bikes in the park.

Several number and form errors: 'around from 10 to 15 years old year old kids' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'among 10- to 15-year-old kids' for age ranges. 'kids who likes' has subject-verb agreement error; 'kids' (plural) requires 'like'. This addresses singular/plural and subject-verb agreement (ID 27) and age expression. Suggestion: use hyphenated age compound adjectives and ensure plural subjects take plural verbs.

× Yes, bikes are pretty popular in my country, especially around from 10 to 15 years old year old kids who likes to do extreme parkour with their bikes in the park.

✓ Yes, bikes are pretty popular in my country, especially among 10- to 15-year-old kids who like to do extreme parkour with their bikes in the park.

The verb 'likes' does not agree with the plural subject 'kids'; use 'like'. Also clean up the age-range expression as shown. Suggestion: always match verb number to the subject and use standard age-range phrasing.