自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (when you used it, who you rode with, a memorable moment). Use simple linking words (for example, because, so, when) and correct tenses and articles. Avoid vague phrases like “this memory last missing.”

範例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I rode it to school and to the local market almost every day, and I especially remember racing my friend down the street after classes. Because the bike was light and reliable, I used it for most short trips, and I was very fond of it.

建議: Answer directly, then give clear reasons with specific examples. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and smoother linking words (for example, although, because, however). Avoid unfinished fragments and unclear words like “AI.” Keep to one or two sentences of support.

範例: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or public transportation for convenience. For example, many cities have crowded roads and few safe bike lanes, so people usually drive or take buses instead.

× Actually it's a hard question for me because I can't remember this memory last missing.

✓ Actually, it's a hard question for me because I can't remember this memory from my childhood.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and inappropriate phrase 'last missing.' Use 'from my childhood' to indicate the time frame. Also add a comma after 'Actually' and keep 'can't remember' because the speaker refers to a present inability to recall a past memory.

× I used to use it when going somewhere like school or like markets.

✓ I used to use it to go to places like school or the market.

'Used to' correctly expresses past habitual actions; follow with an infinitive 'to go' rather than 'when going' for clarity. Use 'places like school or the market' for idiomatic English and use singular 'market' when speaking generally.

× I usually use this bike and I love my bike and I remember this memory.

✓ I used to use that bike a lot; I loved it and I remember those times.

The context is past habitual, so 'usually use' and 'love' (present) are inconsistent. Change verbs to past: 'used to use' and 'loved.' Replace 'this bike' with 'that bike' for past reference and change 'this memory' to 'those times' for natural phrasing.

× It is so.

✓ That's how it was.

'It is so' is unnatural here. Use 'That's how it was' to confirm a past situation. This matches the past-tense context.

× Actually it is not popular in my country because people use prefer use and public transportation or our car.

✓ Actually, bikes are not very popular in my country because people prefer to use public transportation or cars.

The sentence has multiple issues: subject-verb agreement and word order. Use plural 'bikes are' to match general statement. 'Prefer to use' is the correct verb pattern. Use 'cars' (plural) rather than 'our car' when speaking generally. Add commas for clarity.

× And I can see bike Rd. but I didn't use this road because I have AI, have a car and.

✓ I can see bike lanes, but I don't use them because I have a car.

'Bike Rd.' is not standard; use 'bike lanes.' The tense should reflect present habit ('I don't use them'). Remove unclear 'AI' and the trailing 'and.' Keep the sentence concise and grammatically complete.