自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, sentence structure and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct past tense and contractions, and avoid repetition. Add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, "because" or "so"). Keep answers natural and within 3–4 sentences.

範例: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. My father owned a motorcycle and he usually rode it, so I didn’t learn to ride until I was older. Because I was quite young, I was afraid and preferred to walk or take the bus with him.

建議: Clarify the comparison between bikes and cars and use coherent linking words. State your opinion clearly, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use correct vocabulary (e.g. "motorbikes" or "motorcycles" if you mean those) and avoid contradictory statements without explanation.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially motorcycles. For example, many people prefer motorcycles for short trips because they are cheaper and easier to park. However, for long or mountainous trips some people choose cars because they are more comfortable and safer for families.

× When I was child I not have bike but my father have bike.

✓ When I was a child, I did not have a bike, but my father had one.

Errors: missing article before 'child', incorrect negation and verb forms for past tense ('not have' should be 'did not have'), and inconsistent verb tense for 'have' referring to the father (use past 'had'). Suggestion: add the article 'a' before 'child', use the auxiliary 'did' + base verb for past simple negation, and use past tense 'had' for the second clause. Also include commas for clarity.

× Because I was child then I not know how to drive bike.

✓ Because I was a child then I did not know how to ride a bike.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'child', incorrect negation in past tense ('not know' should be 'did not know'), wrong verb 'drive' for bike (use 'ride'), and missing article before 'bike'. Suggestion: use 'a child', form past negative with 'did not' + base verb, and use 'ride a bike'.

× That's why my father have bike, he was driving bike when I was childhood.

✓ That's why my father had a bike; he rode it when I was a child.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'have' should be past 'had' for third person in past context, awkward tense and phrasing 'was driving bike' and 'when I was childhood'. Suggestion: use past simple 'had', use 'rode it' or 'used to ride it', and correct phrase 'when I was a child'. Use a semicolon or separate sentences for clarity.

× Yes, of course bikes are popular in all country.

✓ Yes, of course bikes are popular throughout the country.

Errors: missing article 'the' before 'country' or incorrect preposition 'in all country'. Suggestion: use 'the country' or 'throughout the country' to indicate the whole nation; keep plural 'bikes are'.

× In my country also by car popular because for when we go for any trip for in mountains then we can go on bikes because we go in car.

✓ In my country, bikes are also popular because when we go on trips to the mountains, we often go by bike instead of by car.

This sentence has multiple structure problems: incorrect word order ('by car popular'), wrong prepositions ('for in mountains'), and inconsistent comparison ('we go on bikes because we go in car'). Suggestion: restructure to 'bikes are also popular because when we go on trips to the mountains, we often go by bike instead of by car.' Use correct prepositions 'on trips' and 'to the mountains', and 'by bike/car' for transport.

× Cars are not safe.

✓ Cars are not safe.

The sentence is grammatically correct. It correctly uses the adjective 'safe' to describe cars. No change needed.