自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and use correct tense and concise phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one brief specific detail about the bike (type, color, or a memory). Keep it to 1–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with a basket, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon.

建議: Organize your response: give a direct opinion, then one or two clear reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, remove repetition) and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., "popular," "exercise," "commuting"). Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid repeating words.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people cycle for exercise and to avoid traffic, although bad weather sometimes lowers how often they ride.

× Yes I do, I did have a bike.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike.

The student used both present ('do') and past ('did have') auxiliaries together, which is inconsistent. The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so use past tense only. Remove the present auxiliary 'do'. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for clarity.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my family because that people love exercising like cycling though the weather is is not good.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my family because people love exercising by cycling, though the weather is not good.

Multiple issues relate to tense and word choice: 'because that people' is ungrammatical — use 'because people'. 'Love exercising like cycling' is awkward; use 'love exercising by cycling' or 'love cycling'. Duplicate 'is is' is a typo. Maintain present tense 'are popular' and 'love' because this describes a general present habit. Add a comma before 'though' and remove the extra 'is'.

× But other people seem seem to like biking.

✓ But other people seem to like biking.

This sentence contains a repeated word 'seem seem' (duplication). Remove the duplicate to correct the sentence. The remaining structure and tense are appropriate for describing a general present tendency.