自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct short answer (yes/no) with a brief topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used it to ride to a friend’s house. Because the roads near our home were quiet, I practiced often and became quite confident riding it.

建議: You again echoed the examiner instead of answering and added unclear words. Start with a clear opinion (Yes/No/It depends), then give specific reasons or examples linked with words like “because” or “for example.” Use correct grammar (plural ‘bikes’) and keep responses concise.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes to avoid traffic, and there are shared bike schemes in several urban areas which makes cycling convenient.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure and pragmatic error: answers to past-tense 'Did you...' should be a past-tense statement (subject + past verb). Use 'I had' rather than repeating 'Did you...'. Suggestion: answer directly with 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think bike are popular in your country with you?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Multiple issues: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally (article/number error), and the verb must agree with the plural subject so 'are' is correct with 'bikes' (subject-verb agreement). The phrase 'with you' is unnecessary and ungrammatical in this context; it should be removed. The correct question form is 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' Suggestion: remove irrelevant phrases and use plural for general statements about a category.