自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 句子时态、数和语法需要修正，表达要更直接并更连贯。回答应以主题句开头（直接回答问题），然后用一到两句具体细节支持。注意使用连词（例如：at first, then, because）使叙述更顺畅，并控制在最多五句内。具体改进点包括：将have改为had；将I have a big bag（无关信息）删除或解释为与问题无关；使用过去时描述学骑自行车的经历；修正teach → taught，I am nervous → I was nervous，I began confident → I became confident。

範例: Yes, I did — I had a bicycle when I was a child. My father taught me to ride it, and at first I was very nervous because I kept falling. However, after practising with him for a few days, I became confident and could ride on my own.

建議: 回答要更自然并提供更具体细节和原因。先直接回答问题，然后用一到两句给出原因或例子。注意语法（例如：see → see many people riding bikes；avoid repeating words like "when when"），并使用连词（for example, because, so）连接想法。可以补充谁常骑（学生、上班族）、在哪些时段、以及原因（方便、环保、避免交通拥堵）。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many office workers and students ride bicycles during rush hour because it’s faster and cheaper than driving in heavy traffic.

× Yes, I have a big bag.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle.

原句使用了“bag”（包）與題目問的“bike”（自行車）不符且時態不正確。考官問的是過去是否擁有自行車，應使用過去式“had”並使用正確名詞“bicycle”或“bike”。建議：注意名詞是否與問題語境一致，並把動詞時態改為過去式。

× When I was child, I still remember that my father teach me how to ride a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I still remember that my father taught me how to ride a bike.

兩處錯誤：1) 缺少冠詞，應為“a child”。2) 時態錯誤，主句是回憶過去，動詞應用過去式“taught”。建議：注意在表示過去事件時，全句或相關動詞應使用過去式；名詞“child”前通常需要不定冠詞“a”。（語法類型：22、5）

× At first I am nervous, but I began confident when I learned how to ride a bike.

✓ At first I was nervous, but I became confident when I learned how to ride a bike.

三處錯誤：1) 與敘述過去經驗時，be動詞需用過去式“was”而非現在式“am”。2) “began confident” 搭配不當，應用“became confident”（變得有自信）。3) 句內時態應一致，後半句使用了過去式“learned”，前半句也應用過去式。建議：描述過去情況時，保持整句過去時；注意動詞搭配，某些形容詞需用“become”表示狀態改變。

× Yes, I can see a lot of people ride bikes, go to work when when it is the rush hour.

✓ Yes, I can see a lot of people riding bikes and going to work when it is rush hour.

幾個問題：1) 動詞形式錯誤，“see someone do”可以，但更自然用現在進行分詞“riding”表示正在發生的動作。2) 句中動作應並列，需連詞“and”。3) 重複了“when”。4) “the rush hour”可簡化為“rush hour”或保留“the”，兩者皆可，但常見說法是“rush hour”。建議：使用現在分詞連接並列動作，刪除多餘詞語並保持流暢。