自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and clear: start with a short topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and hesitations. Use correct verb forms (e.g., "didn't have") and accurate words ("children" or "minors"), and keep to <=5 sentences. Link ideas with words like "however" or "because."

範例: No, I didn't have a proper motorcycle when I was a child. Instead, I had a small bicycle and a toy truck that I often used to ride around the neighbourhood. Because I was a minor and local rules discouraged young people from riding motorcycles, I never owned a bike large enough for the road.

建議: Answer directly then support with one or two clear, specific reasons. Use correct nouns and plurality ("young people", "older people"). Avoid asking questions back to the examiner. Use linking words like "because" and "however." Keep sentences concise and coherent.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people, because they are cheaper and easier to park. However, older people and families often prefer cars for comfort and safety, so car ownership is also common.

× When, when I was a kid, uh, I don't have any bike.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't have any bike.

The sentence mixes past time reference 'When I was a kid' with present tense 'I don't have'. Use past tense 'didn't have' for consistency. Suggestion: match verb tense to time frame (past) and remove filler words.

× I have a bicycle and a toy truck that I used to go anywhere like in your market or other times.

✓ I had a bicycle and a toy truck that I used to take me to places like the market.

The speaker refers to childhood (past), so use past tense 'had' and 'used to'. Also article use: 'the market' is more natural than 'your market'. 'Go anywhere' is awkward; 'take me to places' or 'go to places' is clearer. Suggestion: use past tense consistently and choose appropriate articles.

× So I don't have a bike because I was a minor and in my country miners don't allowed to, uh, travel by bike.

✓ So I didn't have a bike because I was a minor, and in my country minors aren't allowed to travel by bike.

Again, the time frame is past, so 'don't have' should be 'didn't have'. 'Miners' is a spelling error for 'minors'. Use passive construction 'aren't allowed' (present general rule) or 'weren't allowed' if referring to past rule. Also 'don't allowed to' is ungrammatical; modal 'are allowed' or passive 'are not allowed' is needed. Suggestion: correct spelling, match tense, and use correct passive form.

× Well, in my country bikes are very popular among very young peoples because majority of young people choose to drive by.

✓ Well, in my country bikes are very popular among very young people because the majority of young people choose to ride them.

'Very young peoples' is incorrect: 'people' is already plural and not countable here; use 'very young people'. 'Majority' requires 'the majority' and 'choose to drive by' is wrong verb choice for bikes — use 'ride' and include object 'them'. Suggestion: use correct plural form 'people', include 'the' before 'majority', and use 'ride' for bicycles.

× You prefer to drive by by bikes?

✓ Do you prefer to ride bikes?

The original lacks auxiliary 'do' for a question in present simple and uses 'drive by' which is incorrect for bicycles — 'ride' is appropriate. Also duplicate 'by by' is an error. Suggestion: form yes/no questions with 'Do you prefer' + base verb and use 'ride' for bikes.

× Uh, well, like others old ones and others people like to drive by cars.

✓ Well, others, especially older people, prefer to drive cars.

'Others old ones' is ungrammatical; adjective order and choice are wrong. 'Other people' is fine, but 'older people' is the intended meaning. 'Drive by cars' is incorrect; use 'drive cars' or 'travel by car'. Suggestion: use 'older people' and correct verb phrase 'prefer to drive cars' or 'prefer to travel by car'.