自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, tense consistency, and add a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then add one short reason or brief detail using a linking word (e.g., because, so, although). Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 sentences.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. However, I often borrowed my neighbor's bike to ride to school on weekends.

建議: Correct subject-verb agreement and make the supporting detail more specific. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two concise reasons or examples, using linking words (for example, because, so). Avoid vague words like "everyone" unless you qualify them.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many people ride bicycles to work and market trips, especially in small towns where traffic is heavy.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Mixed tense error: the sentence uses present tense 'don't have' with a past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use past simple 'didn't have' to match the past time. Suggestion: use past tense consistently for past time references (I didn't have, I went, I played). Also use contraction appropriately if informal (I didn't).

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because everyone use bikes from going wherever they want to.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because everyone uses bikes to go wherever they want to.

Subject-verb agreement and verb form errors: 'everyone' is singular so the verb should be 'uses' not 'use'. 'From going' is incorrect preposition and structure; use the infinitive 'to go' to express purpose. Also 'use bikes to go' is the natural collocation. Suggestion: match verb form to singular indefinite pronouns and use 'to' + base verb for purpose.