自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid tense errors (use simple past: 'I had' or 'I used to have') and reduce fillers ('uh'). Mention a specific place or routine to make the answer concrete.

範例: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it every day to school and to visit my friends in the neighbourhood. For example, I often rode along the riverbank with my friends on weekends because it was quiet and safe.

建議: Give a direct opinion then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use correct grammar (present simple: 'are popular'; avoid 'used to' for current habits). Use linking words (for example, because, also) and be concise (max 4–5 sentences).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many children ride bikes to school and older people use them to go to the market because they are cheap and convenient. Also, bike-sharing schemes in cities have made cycling even more common recently.

× Yes, of course I was having a bike.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike.

The student used past continuous 'was having' incorrectly; possession in the past is normally expressed with the simple past 'had'. Use 'had' to state that you owned a bike when you were a child.

× I used to go uh at the bike riding at the daily basis and I would love to ride my bike and I used to go at a far away near the uh, besides, uh at the Bank of the rivers.

✓ I used to go bike riding every day, and I loved to ride my bike. I used to go far away, near the riverbank.

Multiple issues: 'go bike riding' is the correct collocation (verb + -ing). 'At the daily basis' is incorrect preposition and phrase; use 'every day'. 'Would love' is incorrect for past habitual action; use 'loved' or 'would' consistently (here 'loved' fits). 'A far away near the' is ungrammatical: use 'far away' or 'far' and place 'near the riverbank' correctly. Also 'Bank of the rivers' is nonstandard; 'riverbank' is the correct noun. Break long sentence into clearer clauses.

× Yes, nowadays every children, even the aged people, senior citizen used to ride bikes to get the nearby or far away places to visit their loved ones and even it is being used to to get any things we need at our daily basis.

✓ Yes, nowadays every child, even elderly people and senior citizens, used bikes to get to nearby or faraway places to visit their loved ones, and they are also used to carry the things we need every day.

'Every children' is a singular/plural error; use 'every child'. 'Aged people, senior citizen' mixes singular/plural and word forms; use 'elderly people' or 'senior citizens'. 'Far away' should be 'faraway' or 'faraway places' as a compound. 'Any things' should be 'the things' or 'any things' is informal; better 'the things we need'. 'At our daily basis' is incorrect preposition and phrase; use 'every day'. Also ensure verbs agree: 'used to ride' for habitual past or 'nowadays' suggests present—better revise tense consistently; here kept 'used' to match student's original but could be 'use' if present is intended.