自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Expand the answer with one or two specific details and use linking words to make it more natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a reason or brief description (e.g., where you rode it, who gave it to you, or how you felt). Keep it concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences).

範例: Yes, I did — I had a small white bike when I was about eight. I often rode it around the neighborhood with my friends, and I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels. It was a gift from my parents and I loved the freedom it gave me.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and then support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and repeated words, and correct small grammar issues (e.g., use plural/singular and natural phrasing). Mention a clear example or comparison to strengthen your point.

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in Korea because most people prefer public transport such as subways and buses. For example, cities have extensive subway networks and commuting by subway is often faster and more convenient than cycling, especially during rush hour.

× Umm actually I I think bike is not the popular in Korea because lots of people use public transportation in usual.

✓ Umm actually I think bikes are not popular in Korea because lots of people usually use public transportation.

Errors include singular/plural mismatch and word order: 'bike is not the popular' is incorrect because 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally (Grammar Problem Type 1) and the adjective 'popular' does not take the definite article here. Also 'in usual' is incorrect; the adverb 'usually' should be used and placed before 'use public transportation'. To improve: use plural nouns for general statements ('bikes are'), drop unnecessary articles ('not popular'), and use the correct adverb form and position ('usually use').