自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Sửa ngữ pháp nhỏ và chọn từ chính xác hơn; tránh lỗi đánh máy và câu không tự nhiên. Cụ thể: (1) Thay “had to buy” bằng “had” hoặc “was given” nếu ý là cha mẹ mua; (2) Sửa lỗi đánh máy “wrote” thành “rode”; (3) Giữ câu ngắn gọn, dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể; (4) Dùng liên từ hợp lý như “because” hoặc “so” để nối ý khi cần. Thực hành nói 3–4 câu (không quá 5) với cấu trúc: chủ đề + mô tả + lý do/kỷ niệm nhỏ.

範例: Yes, I had a small red bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood with my friends every weekend. I remember learning to balance on it quickly because we spent hours practicing together.

建議: Cải thiện sự mạch lạc và loại bỏ từ thừa. Cụ thể: (1) Loại bỏ “where” thừa và đặt lý do sau mệnh đề chính; (2) Dùng từ vựng chính xác như “commuters” thay vì “people” nếu muốn chỉ người đi làm; (3) Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể hoặc số liệu nếu có để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn; (4) Dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so” để kết nối lý do. Giữ độ dài 2–3 câu rõ ràng.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and nearby commuters because they are cheap and convenient. For example, I often see many students riding bikes to university every morning, and some cities even have dedicated bike lanes to support them.

× Well, yes, I had to buy when I was a child.

✓ Well, yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence uses 'had to buy' which implies obligation rather than possession; plus it's awkward without an object. The question asks about possession in childhood, so use simple past 'had' to indicate possession. Suggestion: use 'I had a bike' or 'My parents bought me a bike' to be clear. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I wrote it almost every weekend when the weather was good.

✓ I rode it almost every weekend when the weather was good.

The verb 'wrote' is incorrect in context; the intended action is riding a bike, so use the past tense verb 'rode'. Maintain simple past to match the time reference 'when I was a child' and specify the object 'it' (the bike). Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Well, I think bikes are quite popular in the country, especially among students and people who live near their workplaces where because they are cheap and convenient.

✓ Well, I think bikes are quite popular in the country, especially among students and people who live near their workplaces because they are cheap and convenient.

The original contains an extra and misused connector 'where' before 'because', causing a sentence structure error. Remove 'where' to connect the reason clause properly with 'because'. Ensure the sentence flows: 'people who live near their workplaces' followed by the reason 'because they are cheap and convenient'. Grammar problem type ID: 16

× For example, I often see many students riding bikes to university in the morning.

✓ For example, I often see many students riding bikes to university in the mornings.

The original is mostly correct, but pluralizing 'morning' to 'mornings' is more natural when describing a habitual action. Use present simple 'see' for habitual observation and plural 'mornings' to indicate frequency. Grammar problem type ID: 6}]}MERCHANTABILITY DISCLAIMED. Notwithstanding any other provision of this Agreement, in no event shall...