自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap daha doğal ve dilbilgisi açısından doğru olmalı. Geçmişten bahsederken tutarlı zaman kullanın (past tense). Konuyu doğrudan yanıtlayın, ardından kısa bir neden veya ek ayrıntı verin. Bağlayıcı ifadeler (for example, because, so) kullanarak mantığı netleştirin. Cümle sayısını 2–4 arasında tutun ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment and there wasn't enough space to store one. However, I sometimes borrowed friends' bikes to ride in the park.

建議: Cevap daha akıcı ve düzenli olmalı. Başlangıçta net bir görüş belirtin, sonra karşılaştırma yaparken bağlaçlar kullanın (for example, however, whereas). Yer adlarını belirtirken kelime sırasına dikkat edin ve tekrarları azaltın. Destekleyici bir neden veya kısa örnek ekleyin.

範例: Yes, bikes are popular in some parts of my country, but their popularity varies by city. For example, in Ankara biking is less common because of the traffic and hills, whereas in Izmir and Istanbul cycling is more popular due to milder weather and dedicated bike lanes.

× When I was a child, actually I'm not interested in bikes or skates. So no, I didn't have a bike when I'm a child.

✓ When I was a child, I wasn't interested in bikes or skates. So no, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The speaker mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'I'm not interested' is present tense but context requires past ('I wasn't interested'). Also 'when I'm a child' should be 'when I was a child' to match past time. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent by using past tense for events in childhood: use 'wasn't' and 'was'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× In my country I think bikes are more popular in different cities. For example where I live in Ankara it's not very popular I think, but it is in Izmir or Istanbul very popular.

✓ In my country, I think bikes are more popular in some cities. For example, where I live in Ankara they are not very popular, I think, but they are very popular in Izmir and Istanbul.

The original sentences have awkward word order and unclear reference. 'Different cities' is vague; 'some cities' is clearer. 'It's not very popular' uses singular 'it' while 'bikes' is plural; use 'they are not very popular'. Also place adverbs and adjectives in natural positions: 'very popular in Izmir and Istanbul.' Suggestion: Match plural subject with plural verbs and use natural word order: subject + verb + complement. Grammar problem type ID: 26