自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer grammatically correct, more concise, and slightly more detailed. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), then briefly explain why you were scared and give a specific example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas. Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I was often afraid to ride it because it wobbled without training wheels. For example, I would only ride on the sidewalk or with a parent holding the seat until I learned to balance.

建議: Provide a clear, structured response: state your opinion, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Avoid filler words and repetitions. Use linking words such as "for children," "however," and "also" to make the answer coherent. Keep it to 3–4 sentences and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "common," "commonly used for recreation").

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For children, bicycles are a common toy and a simple way to get around. However, many adults use bikes mainly for exercise, leisure rides, or competitive events such as local races.

× Yes I do have a bike when I was a child, but I often get scared when riding a bike, especially if they don't have a guiding wheel.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I often got scared when riding it, especially if it didn't have training wheels.

Issues: present auxiliary 'do have' is incorrect for past time reference (use past tense 'had') — Past tense issue (ID 5). Mixed present habitual 'often get scared' should match past context (use 'often got scared') — Past tense issue (ID 5). Pronoun 'they' referring to a singular bike is incorrect; use 'it' — Incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12). 'Guiding wheel' is nonstandard; use 'training wheels' (word choice but treated as adjective/noun choice). Suggestions: Use consistent past tense when describing past experiences, replace plural pronoun with singular to match 'bike', and use common term 'training wheels'.

× Yeah, I think it is popular in our country specifically if you were a child, they yeah, it is usually prone to children.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in our country, especially among children.

Issues: 'it is popular' mismatches plural 'bikes' — Subject-verb agreement / singular-plural issue (IDs 27 and 1). The clause 'if you were a child' is awkward and incorrect for general statement; use 'especially among children' — Sentence structure/tense issue (ID 26 and 6). 'They yeah, it is usually prone to children' is ungrammatical: 'prone to' is wrong here (objects don't get 'prone'); use 'popular among children' and remove filler words. Suggestions: Make subject and verb agree in number, use 'among' to indicate group, and avoid filler words for clarity.

× They have a lot of that. While when it comes to adult, it is usually used in hobbies like riding a bike with like with tournament like that.

✓ There are many of them. As for adults, bicycles are usually used for hobbies, such as recreational riding or competitions.

Issues: 'They have a lot of that' is vague and ungrammatical; 'There are many of them' or 'Many people have them' fixes structure — There be issue / sentence structure (IDs 3 and 26). 'When it comes to adult' needs plural 'adults' and article/number agreement — Incorrect use of nouns/pronouns (ID 12) and singular/plural issue (ID 1). 'It is usually used' is vague and mismatched; better to use plural 'bicycles are usually used' — Subject-verb agreement (ID 27). Repeated 'like with' and 'like that' are redundant; 'such as recreational riding or competitions' is clearer. Suggestions: Use correct plural forms, choose precise nouns, and restructure sentences to match number and intended meaning.