自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Jawaban tidak tepat dan mengandung kesalahan kosakata (“pie” bukan “bike”). Perbaiki dengan menjawab langsung pertanyaan, gunakan struktur sederhana: kalimat topik lalu detail singkat. Gunakan tense lampau (had) dan tambahkan satu atau dua rincian spesifik (mis. siapa yang memberinya, kapan, warna atau kenangan singkat). Hindari jawaban terlalu pendek atau salah kata.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it every afternoon to visit my friends.

建議: Jawaban terlalu singkat dan tidak mendukung pendapat dengan alasan atau contoh. Jawab langsung dengan topik sentence lalu tambahkan alasan spesifik dan linking words (e.g., because, for example). Sertakan konteks seperti kota vs pedesaan atau data sederhana jika memungkinkan.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see many commuters cycling to work, and bike lanes have become more common recently.

× Yes, I have a pie.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The student used present simple 'have' and the wrong noun 'pie' which does not match the examiner's past-tense question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'. The correct response should use past tense 'had' to match 'Did you...' and should refer to 'bike'. Suggestion: Use past tense for experiences in the past (e.g., 'I had a bike').

× Yes, I think.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular.

The student's reply 'Yes, I think.' is grammatically acceptable but incomplete and vague in this context. The question asks 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' so the response should repeat or complete the clause (subject + opinion) for clarity. Suggestion: Provide a full clause after 'I think' (e.g., 'I think bikes are popular in my country').