自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, tense consistency, and provide a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence using past tense, then add a short reason or detail using a linking word. Keep it natural and within 1–3 sentences.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I often borrowed my neighbor's bike to ride to the park on weekends.

建議: Be more specific and avoid unclear terms. Give a topic sentence in present tense, then add a concrete reason or example using a linking word (e.g., because, for example, so). Use relevant vocabulary like "commuting," "delivery bikes," or "cycling culture."

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute in crowded cities. For example, delivery companies rely on motorbikes, and more people are choosing bicycles for short trips to save money.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use the past tense 'didn't have' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: Use past simple for actions or states that occurred in the past (e.g., 'I didn't have a bike').

× Yes, I think so. Our BA bikes are popular in our country.

✓ Yes, I think so. Bikes made by BA are popular in our country.

The original sentence 'Our BA bikes are popular in our country' is unclear and awkwardly structured. It is better to clarify the relationship between 'BA' and 'bikes' by saying 'Bikes made by BA' or 'BA bikes are popular' depending on intended meaning. Also avoid repeating 'our' twice; 'in our country' is sufficient. Suggestion: Choose a clear noun phrase (e.g., 'BA bikes are popular in our country' or 'Bikes made by BA are popular in our country').