自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is direct and natural but brief. Add one or two specific supporting details and a linking word to make it more informative and coherent. Keep the response under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it every weekend in the park. Because I practiced a lot, I learned to ride without the training wheels by age seven.

建議: Your answer gives an example but has some grammar and clarity issues. Use clearer sentence structure, correct verb forms, and include one more specific detail (who participates or how common casual cycling is). Use linking words like 'for example' and 'also'.

範例: Yes, bikes are popular in my country. For example, we host the UAE Tour, a professional cycling race, and there are many community rides and cycling clubs. Also, many people cycle for exercise and short commutes, especially in cooler months.

× For example, there is a race that it's called the UAE Tour and there is a lot of races that my country do it for the people who love riding the bikes.

✓ For example, there is a race called the UAE Tour, and there are many races that my country organizes for people who love riding bikes.

Multiple issues fall under the 'Verb + -ing form' category as defined by the provided list, but corrections also address related grammar problems while only tagging the primary type. Problems and fixes: 1) Unnecessary relative clause 'that it\'s called' is wordy and ungrammatical; use the reduced clause 'called the UAE Tour'. 2) 'there is a lot of races' mixes singular 'is' with plural 'races' and uses the informal quantifier 'a lot of'; correct plural agreement and quantifier to 'there are many races' (this also relates to singular/plural and subject-verb agreement). 3) 'my country do it' is ungrammatical: the country (third-person singular) requires 'organizes' and should not use the dummy pronoun 'it'; use 'my country organizes'. 4) 'riding the bikes' is awkward and redundant; use 'riding bikes' or 'cycling'. Specific suggestions: simplify clauses, ensure subject-verb agreement ('there are', 'organizes'), and prefer 'many' over 'a lot of' in formal speech. The original use of 'riding the bikes' incorrectly uses the definite article and an unnecessary pronoun; use the gerund 'riding' with the plural noun without 'the'.